Let us live more for our homes. Let us love one another more. Let us cease to complain, criticize and contradict each other. Let us be more patient with each other’s faults. Let us not keep back the warm loving words that lie in our hearts until it is too late for them to give Comfort. Soon separations will come. One of every wedded pair will stand by the other’s coffin and grave. Then every bitter word spoken, and every neglect of love’s duty, will be as a thorn in the heart…..
J.R. Miller
Do you speak that way? i.e. “Let us…” beautiful thoughts but I would suggest you write like you speak (minus profanity if that’s part of your normal speech). It sounds lofty and pretentious. Just be genuine. It’s better that way. And keep writing 🎯
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Do you speak that way? i.e. “Let us…” beautiful thoughts but I would suggest you write like you speak (minus profanity if that’s part of your normal speech). It sounds lofty and pretentious. Just be genuine. It’s better that way. And keep writing 🎯
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